Thursday, 21 February 2013

Some great ideas used in this writing
How small am I!
Wow! Too big for me.
When I got to Pukemokemoke and saw the big trees, I cried out “Oh no, not those trees. I feel like I am shrinking”. But Amber said “You’ll do fine”.
                                                                Rebecca S

Look carefully and you may see the stick insect on the trunk of the tree.

Sophie wrote:
Some are green.
Some are brown. Some can camouflage.
Oh, now where has he gone?
You can see him on this tree. He can camouflage alright! I saw him up close. He was scary but he was harmless.
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4 comments:

  1. Room235 March 2013 at 12:21

    You have written some short sentences Sophie, which reminds of a poem -Luka

    It feels like I want to be in that story-Nathaniel.

    Finding the stick insect was a challenge as they are great at camouflaging to stay hidden from predators. -Miss McKinnon

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  2. Jessica5 March 2013 at 21:52

    very well thought rebecca S

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  3. mrs stent17 March 2013 at 19:49

    Now with the photo of the stick insect alongside your writing Sophie it all makes sense.

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  4. Allana and Russ19 March 2013 at 18:46

    Cool story Rebecca and Sophie, awesome writing. Nature is very interesting to explore. Well done Mrs Stent and the year three team for such an awesome bush adventure at Pukemokemoke. We enjoyed reading and listening to all the bush stories. Keep up the great work room 11!!

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