Wednesday, 15 May 2013

My Writing

This is the writing I did today. I hope you like it.
By Seumas

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9 comments:

  1. Room 515 May 2013 at 19:33

    What a sad story. I wonder how it ends?
    Mr F

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  2. Anonymous15 May 2013 at 20:43

    Good writing Seumas! from rebecca's mum

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  3. Anonymous16 May 2013 at 00:26

    I thought your dog really was taken and I felt really sad. Luckily Lillie said it was a made up story and I felt much happier. Good writing. Lillie's Mum

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  4. Anonymous16 May 2013 at 00:29

    Awesome writing Seumas. From Lillie

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  5. Caleb and Ryan27 May 2013 at 22:43

    Wow Seumas - that was a cool story. Lucky it was made up.

    From Caleb

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  6. Anonymous16 June 2013 at 22:44

    I like my writing

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  7. Anonymous24 June 2013 at 22:59

    That would be a sad story Seumas, I'm so glad it didn't happen to us.
    From Seumas' Mum

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  8. Anonymous25 June 2013 at 00:42

    Glad to hear it was made up Seumas! You have a great imagination. Aidan's Mum

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  9. Miss Cramond27 June 2013 at 17:15

    Wow Seumas thats great writing
    Caitlin

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