Wednesday, 27 March 2013

The Weta's Adventure
by Kayne
one day a weta went on adventure all over the forest. and he was looking for food  like bugs and plants so he climbed a tree because he thought he could see some food . and he stayed in the tree because he thought it was safe but as the sun went down it got darker and he looked up the tree hole and he saw red glowing eyes AAAAAAH! its a possum as it ran down the tree it was licking its lips and he said bad luck I am going to eat you the weta was shivering like mad he was so scared  the possum was laughing ha ha ha fresh meat he said  his red eyes was so scary. So he ran as fast as he could and he ran out the tree hole and he covered the hole with sticks and was safe. He was trapped and the weta was safe.

I am working on making different sentence beginnings. Can someone help me with ideas please.

2 comments:

  1. Great work Kayne!, Just take your picture closer.
    Alex Rm23

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  2. Great work Kayne. Lucas and Hannah

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