Wednesday, 27 March 2013

The Weta's Adventure
by Kyla
One day a mother and baby weta went trotting down the path. But a owl was spying on them. Look   said baby weta theres an owl spying on us. No there Isn't said mother weta. Yes there is. But theres no  such thing as owls oh really you think so yes I think so. Do you yup said baby weta scratching his body. Lets go home but we haven't had diner yet. It  dosint mutter about diner baby weta. he sneaked away in the woods. mother weta missed baby weta. baby weta had the same heart.

I am working on making different sentence beginnings. Do you think I have achieved my goal?

4 comments:

  1. Great writing Kyla! It looks interesting!
    Alex Rm23

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  2. Great story Kyla! I think you achieved your goal:)
    Dad.

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  3. great job kyla. kyla

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